פורסם 2003 בפברואר 2522 שנים היי חברה אם אתם חושבים שרמת הידע שלכם היא מספיק גבוה כדי לבדוק מבחינה דיקדוקית את הטקסט הבא שכתבתי אשמח מאוד אם תמצאו טעויות ותתקנו אותי!!תודה מראש..The Use Of Force----------------In my opinion the word "Force" as a verbmeans to make someone or something todo something against his mind by violence.The force can be used in a different cases.In some of them ,the force can be used for a good targets and in some of them for bad.I think that the word "Force" which appearsin the title of the story("The Use Of Force")is very connected to the story itself.In the story the word "Force" was used exactly as I described in paragraph 1, for example when the doctor forced the girl to open her mouth,which act was only for a good target.I think that the doctor in the story did a right thing by forcing the patient to openher mouth, because he wanted to help her and save her life.
פורסם 2003 בפברואר 2522 שנים הנה הטקסט אחרי התיקון..תיקנתי מה שיכלתי..The Use Of Force----------------In my opinion, the use of the word "Force" as a verbmeans, to make someone do something against his mind by using violence.The force can be used in a different casessome of them are with good perpouse and some of them for bad.I think that the word "Force" which appearsin the title of the story ("The Use Of Force")is very connected to the story itself,In the story the word "Force" was used exactly as I described in paragraph 1, for example when the doctor forced the girl to open her mouth,which his act was only for a good target.I think that the doctor in the story did a right thing by forcing the patient to openher mouth, because he wanted to help her and save her life.יכול להיות שיש אצלי טעות אחת או שניים...תקנו אם תמצאו.
פורסם 2003 בפברואר 2522 שנים במקום against his mindלא עדיף לשים against his willing, בהנחה שככה מאייתים רצון.כי אחרי הכל זה נגד רצונו.
פורסם 2003 בפברואר 2522 שנים Edited and RevisedIn my opinion, the use of the word "Force" as a verbmeans, to make someone do something against his will by using violence.The force can be used in different cases - some of them are with good purpose and some of with a bad one.I think that the word "Force" which appearsin the title of the story ("The Use Of Force")is very connected to the story itself,In the story the word "Force" was used exactly as I described in paragraph 1, for example when the doctor forced the girl to open her mouth, his act was only for a good cause.I think that the doctor in the story did a right thing by forcing the patient to openher mouth, because he wanted to help her and save her life.
פורסם 2003 בפברואר 2522 שנים In my opinion, the use of the word "Force" as a verbmeans to make someone do something against his will by using violence.The force can be used in different cases -some of them are with good purposes and some of with a bad ones. I believe that the word "Force" which appearsin the title of the story ("The Use Of Force")is very connected to the story itself.In the story the word "Force" was used exactly as I described in paragraph 1. For example, when the doctor forced the girl to open her mouth,his act was only for a good cause.I think that the doctor in the story did the right thing by forcing the patient to openher mouth, because he wanted to help her and save her life.אם אתה רוצה שלמות אז THIS IS IT ;D
פורסם 2003 בפברואר 2622 שנים The use of the word "Force" as a verb means to use physical power or violence to compel or restrain another person without a given permission. The force can be used in different cases - some for a good purpose, and some for a bad one. I believe that the mentioned word, which can also be spottedin the very title of the story ["The Use of Force"], is very connoted to the plot itself, of where the word "Force" was used exacatly as I described it in paragraph 1. For instance, when the doctor 'forced' his patient to open her mouth, his act was merely done in order to save her life, not to harm her.Some of the modifications:* Dropped "In my opinion". We're not in a kindergarten.* Changed "means to make someone do something" (...) to a better,more professional-wise substitute.* "With good purposes" -> for a good purpose. * "With a bad ones" -> with bad ones -> for a bad one. * "I believe that the word "Force" -> I believe that the mentionedword (...); repeatetive.* "which appears in the title of the story" -> which can also bespotted in the very title of the story. * Decapitalized "The Use Of Force" ( -> The Use of Force)* connected -> connoted.* "For example" -> For instance.
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