היי,אני צריך להגיש חיבור קצר באנגלית אתם יכולים בבקשה לבדוק את מה שכתבתי?

[B0necrack3R]

היי חברה תבדקו את זה בבקשה אך רק מבחינות שגיאות כתיב ו גראמר

תודה מראש.

In this case, if I was the messenger I would take the money back to the rich man.

I think that if I had given him the money it would have hurt my respect and

the respect at my sender. I believe that as the rich man would hear about this story he would be satisfied with my decision.

[B0necrack3R]

מה חברה הכל נכון?? :

אם אתם רואים טעויות בבקשה תקנו אותי.. אני צריך להגיש את זה למחר!!!

[yoss]

In this case, if I were the messenger, I would take the money back to the rich man.

I think that if I had given him the money it would have hurt my respect and

the respect at my sender. I believe that once the rich man hear about this story he would be satisfied with my decision.

לא הבנתי מה אתה רוצה לומר בקטע המודגש

[B0necrack3R]

sorry..., the respect of my sender..

[Component]

In this case, if I were the messenger, I would take the money back to the rich man.

I think that if I had given him the money it would have hurt my respect and

the respect at my sender. I believe that once the rich man hear about this story he would be satisfied with my decision.

זה צריך להיות hears לפי מיטב הבנתי.

[yoss]

צודק!

[frozen_sun3]

אתה צודק ב-100% וגם צריך להיות פסיק שם.