ואני כבר רציתי להחמיא לך שהאנגלית שלך טובה

את שני העמודים הראשונים אני רשמתי מהראש שלי ואת החלקים הראשונים של הביוגרפיה רשמתי אבל נמאס לי והעתקתי את מה שהיה חסר לי עם עריכה קטנה...

אני בטוח שמה שהכי אהבת זה - King broke with his own hands the wall of social separation in the American society. 

רשמתי את זה אחרי סרט  עם הרבה פוליטיקה ועורכי דין! ההשפעה של הסרטים דווקא עוזרת לחינוך.

ד"א, למה הוארד מראה לי שהמילה curioused לא נכונה?

לדעתי האישית - לא הייתי מגיש עבודה ככה.

תוריד את כל הקוים התחתונים, תשאיר הדגשות רק איפה שצריך.

כלומר, איפה שאתה מרגיש שיש צורך להדגיש את המילה.

תקריא לעצמך את העובדה ותבדוק איפה אתה מדגיש מילים, כאילו, בשביל להבהיר רעיון מסויים שקשור למילה הזו.

כתב נטוי תעשה אך-ורק על ציטוטים, כך מקובלך בד"כ.

ובחייאת, תקטין את הגודל של השנים, זה איזה שלוש נקודות יותר מהשאר...

ד"א, למה הוארד מראה לי שהמילה curioused לא נכונה?

סביר להניח שזה בגלל שאין מילה כזאת

למה התכוונת? סקרן? (curious)

כן סקרן בעבר... [בניין פיעל]

והעלתי את העבודה הערוכה יש הבדל משמעותי בהדגשות אבל אני מרגיש שזה ... שזה לא ממש מעביר ומדגיש את הדברים החשובים...

http://rapidshare.de/files/6848979/____ae_________-_____2.doc.html

את השנים להקטין? אבל זה TIME LINE אני חייב להדגיש את השנים... במקום בצבע שאני אף פעם לא משתמש בו לעבודות [שחור רק] אני מדגיש בגודל ו.. דגש.

עריכה :

שיטטטטטטטטטטטטטט עד שסידרתי את העבודה זה שמר אבל את העבודה שהייתה בהתחלה בטעות לא יודע איך זה קרה.

הינה עשיתי שוב פעם... סליחה שהתעקבתי פשוט שכחתי לסגור את האור ונכנס איזה יתוש או משהו מוזר כזה אז עד שהרגתי אותו...

http://rapidshare.de/files/6848979/____ae_________-_____2.doc.html

I took your original version and edited it, and here are the results:

I chose Martin Luther King Jr. as the famous figure for my project because of the effect he had on me when I was exposed to the remarkable thing this man had done. Luther King had changed many people's lives from end to end. He dreamed and struggled to make all people, no matter what race they are, be treated as equal. Moreover, He did not give up his principals, and did not let others affect him by hurting him, his family or his property. Not only that, but, he died while giving a speech to promote his goals. All of those things he had done interested me and that is why I have chosen him as my main figure.

Martin Luther King was an African-American man who fought for African-American people's civil rights in America. During those days in America, in the 1960s, although there were laws against discrimination, people did treat African-Americans as the "lower human race". "Black people" in America were suffering from such discrimination [for example "black people" were not allowed to seat in the front bus's seats and had to give their seats to "white people" if they request them to, and it was considered as an unwritten law] that they were feeling mistreated and abused.

Martin Luther was exposed to the fight to end those kinds of deprivations by Rosa Louise Parks's case when she did not fulfill white woman's request to take her bus seat. As a result, she was sent to prison.

Martin Luther King Jr. then started to organize protests against the injustices committed against people of color until The Supreme Court of the United States decelerated that the race separation in buss (known as segregation) is to be stopped.

In 1963, Martin Luther King Jr. was assassinated by a white Gunman.

Following that event, his birthdate was decelerated as a national holiday in the United States, the Martin Luther King Jr. day (January 15th). In his life time, Martin Luther king won a Nobel peace prize for his work against racial discrimination, and his famous speech, I have a Dream, became highly quoted by diplomats, politicians and other intellectuals.

The following part of his speech "I Have A Dream" are the most memorable:

I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the "true meaning of its creed: "We hold these truths to be self-evident: that all men are created equal." I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slaveowners will be able to sit down together at a table of brotherhood. I have a dream that one day even the state of Mississippi, a desert state, sweltering with the heat of injustice and oppression, will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice. I have a dream that my four children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character".

I expect to learn more about Martin Luther King Jr.'s great deeds, about how he started with his protests and how he became to be an important leader who changed the lives of many people. Because of his heritage many Americans can now feel equals to their fellow citizens. Luther King broke with his own hands the wall of social separation in the American society.

תודה, אפילו שזה לא ממש היה נחוץ אבל אם כבר שינית כמה דברים אז אני אשתמש בהם.